- Intro - the four paragraphs summarizing all the kings books? Genius! Basically what any story is always about
 |
| A rose tree (Source) |
- The Rustic and the Nightingale - there should have been a purpose for the bird ripping at the roses. And why does the Rustic get a pot of gold just for letting her go??
- The King, The Falcon, and the Drinking Cup - this was good! Definitely a favorite. Could be fun to expand upon. Humans suck.
- The Two Travelers - Salem is my kind of guy, I would second guess this inscription, too! People in tales always make foolish and rash decisions, but he's thinking clearly.
- The Poor Man and the Flask of Oil - oh my god, seriously? This would happen to me...
- The Merchant and his Iron - LOL! That asshole got served
- The Gardner and the Bear - oh, this could definitely be rewritten as a funny misunderstanding
No comments:
Post a Comment